Vision of the line art is acceptable in forms of craftsmanship though visualization would need to be a bit more worked on, there are a few over marked lines, overlapping eachother near the front.
Originality is very good in terms of lineart, the lines are smooth and the lines meet smoothly. Wing design is spot on and eye catching to the viewer, in terms well done. The mane and tail us well done, providing more tone definition to the overall body structure.
Technique used is a curved and string design, mainly organic lines were used which brings out a better work piece for the picture, signature is well placed without being a bother to the art piece, curving well with the tail. though there are a few
The title is very eye-catching providing good props for the art piece in a limited description but in a very helpful matter. the features of the artwork, its adorable and makes a good impression on the viewers
I believe this is fair, you balanced the amount of positive and negative things about this, thanks a lot ^^
Oh dear, i left out a small portion....at the end of technique,
Though there are a few flaws, they are hardly noticable.